Photos of the trial printsGeneral Feedback & Notes
Is there a way to communicate personal experience through colours
Perhaps sans serif fonts might be lighter and easier to read
Language and home – consider the loss of language and the control of language as political
What is that you’re making? Include more content of interviews; aspects of letter writing and magazines (elements from the interviews)
Why form of dictionary to document? Ways of writing and typefaces that can embody this; consider adding more handwritten elements – combining digital and analog to make it more personal
Materiality – for example, riso
Perhaps a clearer divide with more family history based content/ combination of both, eg. one page for each on a spread.
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